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Thinking about the rhyme makes my brain tired,
but it can also be a brain training.
I recommend it!
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[ES]
Pensar sobre rimas cansa mi cerebro,
pero creo que también puede ser entrenamiento cerebral.
¡Lo recomiendo!
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[DE]
Das Nachdenken über den Reim macht mein Gehirn müde,
aber es kann auch ein Gehirntraining sein.
Ich empfehle es!
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[JA]
韻を考えると脳が疲れるのですが、
脳トレにもなりますね。
オススメです！
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Whilst I’m (mentally) here in Egypt, here’s me competing with the Great Sphinx of Giza on who has the better side profile.
Growing up, I always associated the Sphinx with riddles— something I really enjoyed solving (or try to solve) thanks to my brainy sis @deezng who is so good at riddles.
Here are some of my fav (more PC) riddles:
1. I speak with a mouth and hear without ears. I have no body, but I come alive with wind, what am I?
2. This belongs to you, but everyone else uses it.
3. What is seen in the middle of March and April but can’t be seen at the beginning or end of the month?
Can you guess the answers without Google?
I have a score of other riddles in hand, some super stupid but sah funny and some so severely messed up no one could possibly figure it out— I’d be worried if they could.
Howbeit, I’d like to give an honorary mention to my most memorable riddle by the Sphinx in Harry Potter’s Goblet of Fire (who doesn’t love a Sphinx who can rhyme-a-riddle):
“First think of the person who lives in disguise, who deals in secrets and tells naught but lies. Next, tell me what's always the last thing to mend, the middle of the middle and end of the end? And finally, give me the sound often heard during the search for a hard-to-find word.”
This riddle was rather tricky and had I encountered this Sphinx, I’d end up turned into stone for taking way too much time trying to figure the answer out 🕷
Nowadays, we can Google it all, but back in the day, you had to memorize both the riddles and answers! Made it that much more gratifying to figure out these riddles all on my own; even though it could take ages, I was super stubborn and never gave up!
Kinda explains the me today, HA. I guess those riddle solving days had some sorta beneficial influence to my persevering personality.
Er, can someone explain how I went from my picture with the Great Sphinx to talking about my personality? 🥴 #longwindednarcissism
#greatsphinxofgiza
#notsunwaygiza
#doesNATtravelalot
疫情持續，但學習不能中斷。
今天與同學分享Presentality最新的寫作技巧分析。
英文寫作絕對不只是將單字句型套用在模板上就好了。
用專業的寫作方法讓你的寫作有意義!
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最近疫情再次高升，駐台灣的Bloomberg 記者寫了一篇文章：
Complacency Let Covid Erode Taiwan’s Only Line of Defense
自滿讓 COVID 侵蝕了台灣唯一的防線
文章：https://bloom.bg/3ywfKA9
我們來看看Bloomberg寫的一篇好文章：
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📌 結構：當調查故事寫
這篇文章讀起來一點都不無聊，不只是因為它攸關我們的社會，也是因為他在結構上，就像一個偵探調查的故事：
1. Opening line: 戲劇性開場，不要無聊
2. Background: 然後再給簡短背景
3. Key moment: 影響後續發展最關鍵的事件
4. Outcome: 這個決定的後果
5. What to do: 國際專家建議應該怎麼做
6. But.....: 可惜，可能做不到
7. Details: 後面的部分，再進入細節
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📌 最好的開頭 = 簡短有力、抓住注意力、又可以做結論
我們先來看開頭三段：
All the virus had to do was get through the border.
Until this week, Taiwan’s Covid-19 containment appeared to be so effective that virtually no other defenses were put in place: few tests, no local surveillance to pick up undetected infection and close to zero vaccination.
Lauded as one of most successful places in the world at containment, a high level of complacency about the risks had set in among both the public and authorities. Covid-19 seemed to be something happening only in the outside world.
如果是我們認識大部分的人來寫，通常會從第二段開始。為什麼？因為總是要解釋背景嘛！而且任何人在研究這個議題，都會從背景開始教育自己，所以就不自覺的從背景寫起。
但他們不這麼做，反而以一個吸引人的方式開頭：
All the virus had to do was get through the border.
這個開頭有幾個優點：
•簡短一行，讓人不會看到一大坨字就不想要繼續看
•有故事性：好像病毒是一個入侵的敵人
•又是結論：怎麼會發生？一旦病毒溜進來了，就會發生
這種是非常理想的開頭：因為就算我沒有時間看剩下的，也會理解到文章的重點：邊境守的很嚴，但是裡面很鬆散。
第一句，下的太好了。
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📌 給一點背景後，馬上提到關鍵一個決定
記者們解釋背景的篇幅，就只有三段。他們很快就鎖定關鍵的一個 (錯誤) 決定：
The virus’s opening was an ill-fated decision on April 15 to shorten quarantine for airline crew to just three days, as carriers struggled to operate their cargo lines with staff undergoing 14-day isolation periods. Infected pilots introduced a more transmissible U.K. variant, whose spread was then accelerated through a network of “hostess bars” -- places both staff and patrons were reluctant to be associated with, making contact tracing more difficult.
如果他們再花 1-2 段解釋背景，文章就會變得有點無聊，會流失讀者。
所以他們在這裡提到關鍵的失策。
📌 Note：寫作語氣相對正式
這幾位記者，也許是受 Bloomberg 整體風格影響，還算正式。
從哪邊看的出來呢？
The virus's opening was an ill-fated decision...
輕鬆口語化的文章，絕對不會用 "ill-fated" (ill 就是生病/不好嘛，fate 就是命運，所以就是「之後的命運不好」的一個決定。這是一個很不錯的字就是了。
另一個例子，看這句：
Infected pilots introduced a more transmissible U.K. variant, whose spread was then accelerated through a network of “hostess bars” -- places both staff and patrons were reluctant to be associated with, making contact tracing more difficult.
哇噻，尤其 "reluctant to be associated with"，好。。。委婉啊
怎麼樣寫的平易近人一點？
Infected pilots carried a more transmissible U.K. variant, which then spread quickly through a network of "hostess bars". This also made contact tracing harder — because staff and customers didn't want to admit that they worked at or visited these bars.
稍微長一點，但是用的字都比較直白簡單。
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📌 強調嚴重性
這個失策跟破口，有多嚴重的後果？
Taiwan reported 267 new infections Wednesday, bringing the total over the past few days to 1,291 -- a small number in global terms but an astonishing one in a place that, before May 1, had posted just 1,132 cases during the entire pandemic.
The surge from zero to quadruple digits signals that undetected spread has been occurring for months, and concern is now growing that Taiwan will go the way of other cautionary tales, from the outbreak last year in Australia’s Victoria state that took a brutal three-month lockdown to quell, to Thailand’s ongoing surge driven by prison clusters.
"The surge from zero to quadruple"
這邊，寫的非常好，因為雖然不是真正的 rhyme，還是聽起來很近，所以有節奏感。
"Go the way of other cautionary tales" 又是一個文筆很好的寫法，就是「變得跟那些拿來警惕大家的故事一樣」的意思。
但是記得，別在聊天的時候用這些啊，對方會覺得你很奇怪。
這邊他們把最壞的可能性帶進來：就是台灣可能變得跟那些 cautionary tales 一樣。
這邊也讓讀者緊張起來。
但因為他們寫 "concern is now growing..."，又沒有說「誰的 concern」，所以應該要馬上帶具有可信度的 source 進來：
“If they have 300 diagnosed cases, they have 3,000 cases in the community -- they just don’t know it.” said Gregory Poland, a virologist and director of the Mayo Clinic’s Vaccine Research Group. “It’s going to require a hard lockdown, what’s called a circuit-breaker approach, and then getting the vaccine out as quickly as they can.”
這樣就比較有可信度了，也指出一個解決的可能性：lock down，然後疫苗。
但是...
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需要完整分析的同學請留言「看 Bloomberg學資深記者如何寫文章」。
我們每天都在看跟英文溝通/寫作有關的東西，如果想要透過這些「閱讀筆記」跟我們一起看，可在 FB 追蹤我們：https://www.facebook.com/presentality/
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Presentality系列文章:
📌 看貝佐斯致亞馬遜股東的最後一封信，學一些英文寫作小撇步
https://bit.ly/3xCN1cC
📌 英文演講實用的結構與技巧
https://bit.ly/2PHu3Ax
📌 在演講中的四種敘述角度
https://bit.ly/39tNUtv
📌 詩人Amanda Gorman的英文演講技巧
https://bit.ly/39sI3on
📌 從 Most Dangerous Place 文章，看經濟學人寫作邏輯
https://bit.ly/3htqJEs
📌 寫作的終極目標是「提供價值」
https://bit.ly/3yA3gYe
當鈴鼓聲響起時
是該跟著靈感先生走的時候了…
在音樂路上
進行一場不設限的實驗與冒險
韋禮安WeiBird
全新演繹經典英文單曲《Mr. Tambourine Man》
你準備好一起出發了嗎？
🎧 《Mr. Tambourine Man》數位平台：https://Weibird.lnk.to/MTM
🔔 訂閱韋禮安官方頻道 : https://pse.is/WeiBird_Sub
韋禮安全新演繹英文單曲《Mr. Tambourine Man》致敬民歌搖滾教父 Bob Dylan，這首歌是 Bob Dylan 被改編最多次的經典作品之一，《Mr. Tambourine Man》是一首關於「靈感」的歌曲，韋禮安化身為「鈴鼓手先生」，以輕鬆率性的唱腔和編曲重新詮釋，帶著隨性反叛的冒險精神，透過旋律不疾不徐地恣意地暢想和夢想。
《Mr. Tambourine Man》在單曲封面和 MV 設計中特別以六〇年代的復古配色為視覺基調，歌曲旋律從簡單到豐富的層層變化，象徵靈感從點線面的迸發，視覺上更用幾何色塊來呈現樂器的律動。就像《Mr. Tambourine Man》歌曲中一再重複的「I’ll come followin’ you」，對韋禮安來說，沒有靈感時最簡單的解方不是原地等待，而是出發尋找，藉由音樂、電影、書籍，甚至只是烹飪⋯⋯等等生活裡與音樂毫無相關的事情輸入新的刺激，讓身體和腦袋動一動，自然而然就能產生新的創作能量。現在就打開耳朵，準備好一起出發！
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♩ 歌詞 Lyrics
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
I'm not sleepy and there is no place I'm going to
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
In the jingle jangle morning I'll come following you
Though I know that evening's empire has returned into sand
Vanished from my hand
Left me blindly here to stand, but still not sleeping
My weariness amazes me, I'm branded on my feet
I have no one to meet
And the ancient empty street's too dead for dreaming
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
I'm not sleepy and there is no place I'm going to
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
In the jingle jangle morning I'll come following you
Take me on a trip upon your magic swirling ship
My senses have been stripped
My hands can't feel to grip
My toes too numb to step
Wait only for my boot heels to be wandering
I'm ready to go anywhere, I'm ready for to fade
Into my own parade
Cast your dancing spell my way, I promise to go under it
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
I'm not sleepy and there is no place I'm going to
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
In the jingle jangle morning I'll come following you
Though you might hear laughing, spinning, swinging madly across the sun
It's not aimed at anyone
It's just escaping on the run
And but for the sky there are no fences facing
And if you hear vague traces of skipping reels of rhyme
To your tambourine in time
It's just a ragged clown behind
I wouldn't pay it any mind
It's just a shadow you're seeing that he's chasing
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
I'm not sleepy and there is no place I'm going to
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
In the jingle jangle morning I'll come following you
And take me disappearing through the smoke rings of my mind
Down the foggy ruins of time
Far past the frozen leaves
The haunted frightened trees
Out to the windy beach
Far from the twisted reach of crazy sorrow
Yes, to dance beneath the diamond sky
With one hand waving free
Silhouetted by the sea
Circled by the circus sands
With all memory and fate
Driven deep beneath the waves
Let me forget about today until tomorrow
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
I'm not sleepy and there is no place I'm going to
Hey, Mr. Tambourine Man, play a song for me
In the jingle jangle morning I'll come following you
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♩ 音樂製作 Song Credit
作詞｜Bob Dylan
作曲｜Bob Dylan
製作人 Producer｜韋禮安 WeiBird、蔡尚文 Aven Tsai
編曲 Arrangement｜保卜．巴督路 Baobu Badulu
吉他 Guitars｜保卜．巴督路 Baobu Badulu
和聲編寫 Chorus Arrangement｜韋禮安 WeiBird
和聲 Chorus｜韋禮安 WeiBird
口琴 Harmonica｜藤井俊充 Toshi Fujii
製作行政 Production Administrator｜廖婧紋 Melrose Liao
錄音工程師 Recording Engineers｜蔡尚文 Aven Tsai (Vocal、Chorus、Harmonica)、單為明 Link Shan (Guitars)
錄音室 Recording Studios｜Awesome Music Studio (Vocal、Chorus、Harmonica)、Lights Up Studio (Guitars)
混音工程師 Mixing Engineer｜宋星凱 Sean M. Sinclair
混音錄音室 Mixing Studio｜ff studio
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♩ MV製作 Music Video Credit
美術設計 Art Design | 蘇柔方 JouFang Su
動態設計 Motion Design｜朱詠任 Tino Chu
──♫─ 更多韋禮安 ─────────────────────────
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韋禮安 WeiBird IG ｜https://www.instagram.com/weibirdmusic/
韋禮安 WeiBird WeiBo 微博｜https://www.weibo.com/weibird
8Ball - 拍屁股 Lyrics
Arrange / THAIBEATS
Cover Photo / Yungfaker
DTO:
Ayo shake your A double S
不要廢話現在給我 pop it
Don’t be a fool, better be a bitch
靠在牆上屁股給我夾緊
I don’t care big boob 你要記住
我只要求你震動的力度
那是技術碎拍或大鼓
Skinny girl 全部 outlet太落伍
回到現實酒精在催促
Bad bitch 快點幫我老二催吐
這場遊戲 player call me a judge
Call me DTO daddy lunatic
J-King:
Shake it Shake it
Turn it right to the back. Style so nasty
Called me Mac daddy, short but funky
Groupie wanna do me, phat ass only aight~
Some time I rhyme slow. Rhyme quick.
That’s why these girl is on my dick.
女孩問我how high. Don’t ask hopping my ride.
All I learned is pimplogy, from the G's college.
bitch luv me and I luv u too.
That's the hoe who did it with my whole crew. (Biatch~)
HowZ:
看那成熟的蜜桃
我想跟她去洗澡
或者跟她做體操
Shake shake your ass y’all
Tap tap dat ass
Shake shake your ass y’all
Tap tap dat ass
Shake shake your ass y’all
BatOne:
Call me batty bat
Give me fatty ass
就愛妳的屁股比我臉還大（ha
你的屁股曬出陰陽線 不要害羞
就算你有檳榔味 I still love yo
Come on sexy mama if you got it then you got it
就愛你的粉味你的身材不合比例
你是我的芭比我是你的kenny
帶你出去所有男性向我眼神致敬
Baby shake that ass
不要hold back
Dude that’s my bike
髒手拿開
I could do this all day all night
you my sexy lady I’m your dream boy
Herman:
Yeah girl 帶 我 進入 妳的 世界
Back pack 別 擋住 我的 視線
完美 形狀 就 應該 被看見
上下 跳動 理智 快要 斷線
噢 穴 想 我 不再 紳士
打個 兩下 妳 說 我也 真是
衝動 可能 沒有 辦法 根治
男性 本色 看到 大的 就想 認識
哈 just bounce 4 me
別管 太多 規則 儘管 放開 count on me
轉過身 Twerk on me
荷曼 屎蛋 意圖 洩了底
REDLEE:
站起來
誰講可以
照過來
感覺厲害
我鼻著誰欸香味
順勢轉一圈看妳後面
啊S還是M 討M
Skinny outlet 莫提來展
喊水風土尬作伙
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